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man, what's happened -- ferncrest - (54 Byte) 2006-3-20 周一, 23:07 (257 reads) |
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作者：250 在 海归茶馆 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com
spinning too fast means should it develop with a bit more details as you feel rushed now? if so i will do some about it
the real suspense for me is: why do you say not like me? i am dying to know what your perception of my style is....seriously!
i was hesitating for sure: how do i want to pace it out? some want to rush others want to take time....
the advantages of circulating a work online as it goes is that authors can fine tune the stuff in due course
i really do want to hear more from you in coming episodes
be frank and be as critical as you want, i can take a critique, i think!
作者：250 在 海归茶馆 发贴, 来自【海归网】 http://www.haiguinet.com
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 [小说连载][原创]赌（１） -- 250 - (2078 Byte) 2006-3-19 周日, 23:45 (2774 reads) - 五哥是Ｂ型血么？ -- 沙妙 - (0 Byte) 2006-5-11 周四, 01:32 (258 reads)
- 佩服五哥 -- 海道 - (0 Byte) 2006-5-09 周二, 22:32 (207 reads)
- man, what's happened -- ferncrest - (54 Byte) 2006-3-20 周一, 23:07 (257 reads)
- now your feedback has a suspense for me -- 250 - (604 Byte) 2006-3-21 周二, 01:19 (277 reads)
- 够云遮雾罩的啊 -- 如心如意 - (26 Byte) 2006-3-20 周一, 21:44 (308 reads)
- 写得好，欢迎连载 -- 木辛 - (51 Byte) 2006-3-20 周一, 08:06 (316 reads)
- 我想 -- 250 - (7 Byte) 2006-3-20 周一, 18:25 (247 reads)
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